| haiku by Jürgen Ertl | |
| heim in die fremde | |
| in das stein´ge gelände | |
| der fremde kommt heim | |
| commentary by the teachers |
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Die drei Sätze passen nicht zusammen. Daher macht das Gedicht keinen Sinn. One has the feeling that you come from the mountains, but there is no real feeling of exile in the poem.
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