haiku
by
Josef Memminger
Geschminktes Gesicht
im vergreisenden Sommer
du goldene Stadt
commentary by the teachers
Are you looking at an ugly old lady in
Prague? Sabine says it gives her a 19th
cenury feeling. I don't think that the ' "du"
rufen' works: Oh, life! Oh love! etc. This is
not very fresh. Maybe one more time?