haiku by Josef Memminger
 
  Geschminktes Gesicht 
  im vergreisenden Sommer 
  du goldene Stadt 
 
  commentary by the teachers
 
Are you looking at an ugly old lady in
Prague? Sabine says it gives her a 19th
cenury feeling. I don't think that the ' "du"
rufen' works: Oh, life! Oh love! etc. This is
not very fresh. Maybe one more time?