haiku
by
Josef Svoboda
heißer sandburgbau
oma, ein eichkatzerl, schau !
Flakturm ewiggrau
commentary by the teachers
This is a good example of using the imagery of childhood to evoke memory without falling into vapid sentimentality. The poem has movement and grace. I thought of Esterhazy Park, but it could also be Arnberg Park or Augarten. Great!