haiku by Manuela Richter
 
  Nebelverhangen 
  Big Ben nahe der Themse 
  Ich höre the Smiths 
 
  commentary by the teachers
 
The last line is a little bit original, the first two lines somehow so predictable. Perhaps when describing famous places it is better to avoid the obvious
landmarks. "Nebelverhangen" is not a weather situation that anyone ever encounters. It is a writing cliché that gets used to describe fog, but with little emotional effect.