| haiku by Manuela Richter | |
| grelle lichter - lärm bei nacht | |
| times square sonntag morgen | |
| schneeflocken und einsamkeit. | |
| commentary by the teachers |
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5-7-5 syllables make up a haiku. It is also necessary to have a unity of time in a single poem. "nacht" in the first line, "morgen" in the second line. Please rework.
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