haiku by Manuela Richter
 
  Only a second 
  Sun breaking through winter clouds 
  Wallstreet - No one notes. 
 
  commentary by the teachers
 
No dollar notes, no musical notes, no
one "notices"? Wall Street is two words.
Sabine suggests that this is a sterotypical
description of people who work on Wall
Street. I used to work on Wall Street, and I
went looking for the sun in the park every
day at lunch. The poem expresses an
inauthentic idea.