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| haiku by
Frank Friedrichs |
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regenverhangen
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von wasser grau durchflossen
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der stadt lebensstrom
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commentary by the teachers |
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Unklar worauf sich das Gedicht konzentriert: Stadt, Fluss, Bruecke....hmmmm. Perhaps the poem is too abstract --"der stadt lebensstrom"-- to convey an intense feeling. One more time?
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