haiku by Ingrid Pahl
 
  Balken Splittern. Sturm. 
  Hoffnungszuflucht hoch oben... 
  Bonne Mère de Marseille! 
 
  commentary by the teachers
 
Is this a description of Delacroix's "Raft of the Medusa"? It isn't clear what is going on or why:"hoffnungszulucht"? Please rework.