haiku
by
Ingrid Pahl
Balken Splittern. Sturm.
Hoffnungszuflucht hoch oben...
Bonne Mère de Marseille!
commentary by the teachers
Is this a description of Delacroix's "Raft of the Medusa"? It isn't clear what is going on or why:"hoffnungszulucht"? Please rework.