haiku
by
Annette Hartmann-Frobenius
Kiefernzapfenduft,
Schnee und Senf auf der Jacke.
Grenzerfahrungen.
commentary by the teachers
This poem, in contrast to some of your
other works, is quite masterful in
transporting the mood. Winter is
described in an indirect and evocative
way. The last line is open and
mysterious. Good.